For Your Viewing Pleasure – Flash Fiction Friday

“Stop garfrumpting. He’ll hear you.”

“I can’t help it. Look at her.”

“Oh my God! What happened to everything? Where is everyone? Bobby? Sally? Billy?” The woman ran up and down the deserted road where her house once stood. The new truck Bobby had bought her last week was old and rusty.

The two Forlucks looked through the kamkrit and watched the Earthling’s reaction to her first time travel experience as they both broke into garfrumpter which eventually turned into loud snorting through their long bulbous snouts.

“I wish Earth people weren’t so boring.”


“That is sarcasm. It is a type of Earthling humor.”

From an overhead speaker the commander shouted, “Hey you two Forlucks, get back to work!”


For more sarcasm check out Nothing But the Sound of Crickets

Did you find yourself laughing along with the aliens?

Photo by Madison Woods

This is my 100th post. Woo Hoo!

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  1. I love the made up language and thhe picture you paint of two sniggering aliens laughing at a girl in shock, too funny!


  2. Congrats on your 100th post, Susie! Woo hoo! Yes, I found myself laughing with the aliens. And I also found myself admiring your writing. Awesome!


    1. Thanks so much Lynn! I am blogging about my 101st tomorrow. It includes just a little bit of humor about writing that I am sure you will be able to relate to…. Hahaha!


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