She collapsed on the sofa, kicked off her red boots and threw the boat key on top of the coffee table. She remembered the movie Die Hard and dug her toes into the cool carpet. I need a drink.
While stumbling into the small kitchen, her head drummed to the beat of her heart. Her clammy hands shook as she unscrewed the bottle of Jim Beam. She poured herself a triple.
She glanced at the clock and then across the room at the TV remote. No. I won’t turn it on.
She pressed the power button and smiled.
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Dawn broke across the crashing surf as a bloated body rolled in with the tide. Soon, a crowd and TV crew gathered. “It’s another floater,” said the officer.
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You gotta see this video. The Ukulele Orchestra “kills it!”
Are you an ambulance chaser or do you keep moving?
Photo prompt by Susan Wenzel
I think this rendition of “Psycho Killer” is even weirder than the original!
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But that is exactly what I LOVE about it. The weirder the better! Hahaha! I am glad you watched it.
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an unfortunate case of alcohol poisoning?
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I think she “lured” (pun intended) a guy into a boat and killed him and he wasn’t the first….bumbumbumm!
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Ambulance chaser isn’t a luxury choice I have anymore. When My dad was younger he used to have police radio and would show up to all the fires and big events before the authorities. You can bet he was on their watch list.
So, was she party to what happened the night before that led to the body?
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Hahaha! Can you joke with him about that now? Hilarious!
I have no idea what happened. I am thinking messed up hooker or abused housewife that goes off the deep end. (pun intended) Hahaha! Either way it is not the first time she has killed… She is pretty sick!
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Can anyone truly resist the pull of Die Hard? There’s an interesting coldness to her character in the main section, which just piles on the questions when we learn about the body later on. I want to know more!
Brian (Here’s mine: http://pinionpost.com/2012/08/10/the-reunion/)
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Thanks Brian! I had originally said that she was reminded of an old Bruce Willis movie and dug her toes into the cool carpet. My proof-reading-husband had no idea what I was talking about! 🙂
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Strange little piece. Not much remorse there. Well written.
Thanks for commenting on mine.
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I don’t think psycho killers have much remorse, but I would imagine a small shred of humanity strikes them and they have internal conflict.
Thanks Rochelle!
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Excellent writing (as always!). Love the dark intrigue to this piece. And the ukuleles make that song so creepy and good. Love it!
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Enjoyed it but didn’t get any sense of danger or foreboding. Was there a psycho killer on the loose? Was she the psycho killer? Was this a suicide (my first thought)? The only reason I mention psycho killer is that it’s mentioned in your tags. Whe n you get a chance, please read mine. Thanks!
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The clue is the boat key and that a body washed up on shore. She is the psycho killer!
Thanks 8teen39
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The ride – Amazing! And, I love the new look for your blog.
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Thanks Sheri! I am so glad1
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Susie- A femme fatale who rocks the red boots, drowns a triple J and has 101 evil uses for duct tape? Love. It.
As for that David Byrne interpretation, you’re right on. The Uke!
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Thanks Cayman! Not everyone “got’ it. I didn’t have much time to write this one and usually try to make them a little bit more obvious.
She had to wear the boots. I would have IF I were a pyscho , hard-drinking, boat driving, crazy chick! Hahaha!
Going out today to hit some balls around the court? I am still of the walking wounded, but am getting really anxious to get back out there. 🙂
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Simpatico with you on the injury front. An old knee injury sidelined me for a couple days last month, and I’ve battled plantar fascitis for a few years now. Hopefully I can get out there this evening for a bit. Good wishes on your healing.
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Thanks so much Cayman! I am going to PT. Apparently, my alignment is all askew and that’s the reason for all my injuries. Why didn’t someone tell me not to stand with my weight on one hip! I have been doing it for decades! Hahaha!….oh well…..
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Are you talking about your back? If so, you’ve gotta take the TM route. Deeply.
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No thank god. Pelvis and rib cage…
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Okay. It’s your pelvis and rib cage. Hey, that’s no party either. Take care of yourself, Colorado. I need you around here to keep me in check. It’s not like anyone else wants the job.
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It’s MY job!!!!!
It’s not that bad. Apparently, I have been out of whack for a while. I want to be back playing tennis by the first week of September! I neeeeed to run!!!!!!!!!!!! The idea is to get into alignment and end the injuries! Woohoo!
Thanks Cayman!
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Hi Susie,
Glad you’re back! Very tasty bit of hard boiled writing from you this week. Like to see where this one goes. Nothing from me this week. Mentally on vacation.
Ron
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It has been hard to get back into the swing. Thanks so much Ron! Hey it’s still summer so enjoy it. We’ll be here when you come back!
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Consider yourself nominated for the Beautiful Blogger award!
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Awwwww! Thanks so much John and congratulations to you! That is so sweet of you to think of me!
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😉
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Great character description. I wonder what happened to her as a child? A poor, sick, dangerous lady!
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You got it! She is sick. I have never written about a character like this before and it is one I would love to explore. Thanks so much!
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Nice use of breaks in the story to stretch it.
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Thanks so much!
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We’re big Bruce Willis fans, too. Have you seen “Red”? It’s a blast!!
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No, but I will rent it. Thanks!
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I think you’ll love it. It also has Morgan Freeman, John Malkovich and Helen Mirren and a great combination of thriller and comedy.
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You’re one gifted wordsmith, girlfriend!
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Wow! Thanks so much. You just made my day!
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You’re most welcome. Can’t believe no one’s told you that before… 🙂
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I am really new to this whole writing thing (a year and a half), so I’m still learning about the process. I was a medical illustrator and then a mom. This is a third career! 🙂
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Well, I certainly think you’ve found your calling. Don’t stop!
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Ohh! Thank you! I really love it and would rather write than do anything else!
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The world needs more quality wordsmiths….stick with it 🙂
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I plan to. Thanks! When are you blogging again?
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Soon. Just did 3 more today, so am now eyeing off a bottle of Jim Beam to slack off a bit 😀
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Hey! That was in my story! You must be ahead of me in time zones. Happy hour won’t arrive here in Colorado for 8 hours!
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lol it’s 12:20am here (in OZ)..so the bar is definitely open 😉
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Oz!!! That explains it. You are halfway around the world from me! LOL! Tip one for me!
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Roger that!
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🙂
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😀
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Not sure if my replies are going through…we seem to be having a storm that’s affecting the internet…but I put out 3 more posts today, and am collecting my thoughts for another.
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Better pace yourself. You aren’t going to blog them all at once are you???
Your replies are coming through.
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Already published them….so ‘Jim’ is looking real good right about now. And yes, I read about ‘him’ on your blog…
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She sounds like a workaholic like you, Susie!
Great piece of writing!
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Thanks Hook!
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I would certainly need a drink too if I had anything to do with a “floater”…great story. I can’t help but wonder who, what, when, where, why…and how!
~Susan
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I leave a lot hanging or floating …. Hahaha! Thanks so much Susan!
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The before and after is left to our imagination. Wonderful writing as always!
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Thanks so much Barry! Yep. I pack as much as I can into 100 words!
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You certainly have the ability to do so.
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I am so impressed the way the story presented, wow, there are soo much words in my mind now hanging…. ;-). well done…
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Love it! Thought it was about you at first, with the red boots…
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Hahaha! A little she-devil she is!
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